Monday, March 18, 2013

Middle School tanka

I was shocked, amazed
Glancing through voices of people
Printed on paper
Showed me pain of all the dead
Showed me hope of the alive
    -Hikaru Takechi

Looking through their eyes,
The disaster was awful
They suffered a lot
Earthquakes and Thunamis
Lots of casualties and death
    -Arnold Ho

The water comes in.
Flattening every house.
It just keeps coming.
Leaving a ton of damage.
Why did this have to happen?
    -Jackson White

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